Preliminary exercise feedback and learner response
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full . If you've received your feedback via email, you can simply cut and paste it from the email into your blog. WWW: Your editing skills are really very good here – lots to credit. Excellent continuity editing, clear narrative communicated, and a perfect product shot at the end of the advert. You were able to film a lot in the allocated time during our lesson – good time management displayed. EBI: The preliminary exercise advert length was between 30-40 seconds and yours is well over, not a problem for our real coursework but ensure you meet the minimum requirements. In terms of the editing, the main feedback from this project is the audio tracks. Maybe have the audio playing throughout the workout and then maybe it increases when the pack shot of the product is shown. The product pack shot is too fast, and I am not sure the typography and colour make it appealing or links to the product enough. I think the text at the end is not...
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