Media Assessment Learner response
GRADE:5-
Feedback:
03:
-Be very specific about layout design.
-what camera angle shot?
-is this true here?
-say who she is...
-use more detail.
04:
-No it detonates (shows) this.
05:
-watch SPAG
-what message?
-better vocab
-Not sure its about how we feel.its about how child feels and how we can help (interpretative: Dig toilets). Grave connotations?
06:
-What feelings?
-Don't mention what isn't there. That is not the question.
-you have written a lot+not said much at all! use the water aid advert as an example not the stuff about men/adults that is not answering the question
You need to re-do the longer question as the LR as well as posting your marks for each question please.
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