Media Assessment Learner response

GRADE:5-


Feedback:


03:
-Be very specific about layout design.
-what camera angle shot?
-is this true here?
-say who she is...
-use more detail.

04:
-No it detonates (shows) this.

05:
-watch SPAG 
-what message?
-better vocab
-Not sure its about how we feel.its about how child feels and how we can help (interpretative: Dig toilets). Grave connotations?

06:
-What feelings?
-Don't mention what isn't there. That is not the question.
-you have written a lot+not said much at all! use the water aid advert as an example not the stuff about men/adults that is not answering the question

Comments

  1. You need to re-do the longer question as the LR as well as posting your marks for each question please.

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